Writing a Process Essay
Choose a topic that interests you in which you will be able to decribe it in a process. Then, write the essay in this link. Remember, that you have only 350 words to write. Happy writing!
posted by scorpioneo at 11:51 AM
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How to save mother earth?
Our earth is getting ill and it cause of human being. We are the people that damage our earth and also the environment. The effects are influencing human, therefore, we have to avoid it and try to save our mother earth and our self. There are three vital steps that we have to follow to save mother earth which involves provide more information to the young generation, organize the camps at the specific time and encourage the citizen to be more responsible.
First, we need to provide more information to the young generation. Gather as much information as possible and provide it to the young generation such as students. Parent is the person that has to give more information on environment with how to save mother earth to their children since they are young. The moral value is very important for a child. By referring to the given information, they gain more knowledge. They understand what is correct and what is wrong. Therefore, they will avoid from doing something that might pollute the environment. For example, the school might have the campaign or activities that encourage the students to work together for the sake of the only purpose-save mother earth.
Next, the related association should organize the camps at the specific time. The camps have to open to the teenagers and also the oldster. We are the people that living in this world and affected by it. By organizing those camps, we can learn more technique on how to save mother earth, how to look after the earth and how to prevent our earth polluted by the human. Through the camp, we have the opportunity to do something that good for the environment.
Last but not least, government should encourage the citizen to be more responsible. The environment is influencing the citizen and have the strongly relation between each other. Therefore, citizen should be responsible on their responsibility such as clean up the surroundings, do not pollute the air by opened burning activity and etc. Other than that, government can also awake them through media mass. For example, television channel might have more advertising that awake them to save the earth. It is one of the ways to save the mother earth.
In conclusion, we have to save our mother earth by following the steps. We should provide the news to the others and let them know what would be if the earth is illness. By following the steps, its will help the earth to be more colorful and our life to be more healthful.
~pm11~
6:14 PM
Title: How to shop wisely
All of us expect for some very few, use money to buy what we need in this world. We do shopping in various places. Sometimes we are satisfied with what we buy. Sometimes through we do not get our money’s worth and we feel cheated. To avoid being cheated we have to know how to shop wisely.
To shop wisely simply means not wasting our money on useless goods. We have to be careful with what we buy. While we cannot make absolutely sure that what we buy really worth our money, we can reduce our risks of buying faulty goods to a minimum. Here are some suggestions on how to do it such as, check the price of the goods, checked the expired date of the goods and the condition of the goods that we wants to buy.
It is good practice to check the price of the goods first. Shops are required by law to display price tags for all items. Goods that have no price tags are suspect and ought to be avoided. It is also better if we compare the prices of the goods at various places. The money saved on finding the best deal is usually worth the time spent on it.
Next the expiry date of perishable goods should be checked. Items without expiry dates or items that have expired should not be brought. It is silly to buy cheap can of sardines at a much reduced price only to discover that the contents are inedible when we open it.
The condition of the goods that we intend to buy should be checked. For example, cans should be examined for dents and rust. If the cans show any of these signs then they should not be brought. Often the content of such cans will be unsatisfactory too. Vegetables and meat should be examined for the freshness. Do not be fooled by the attractive packaging. See the item itself and make sure it is worth the money.
Finally, we should only buy what we need. All too often we are taken in by attractive sales gimmick and buy things we never use. This is sheer waste of money. Perishable goods will perish if kept too long. It is better to buy fresh things than to discard old useless ones. In this way, we spend our hard-earned money wisely and not to waste it.
[PM 11]
6:26 PM
mandyals
well written essay. however, you have forgotten to include a thesis statement in your introduction paragraph. the thesis statement must state the 3 major steps.
9:43 AM
mandyals.
please ignore my previous comment on your essay. that message for meant for sweatrollipop. mandyals, your essay is good! sweetrollipop, your essay is very well written as well, however, remember to include a thesis statement yea.
9:45 AM
Mickey Mouse
All of us will be facing our finals soon. It's normal to see some of my friends being stressed out about the finals while some looked as though they are totally prepared. How do we actually prepare for exams? In my opinion, there are three basic steps to prepare for examinations which are to pay attention during lectures, have a study plan and carry out group discussions with friends.
Firstly and most importantly, one has to pay attention and give ones full concentration in class while the lecturer is lecturing to ensure good results in exams. Try to copy down the notes that the lecturers given at class and understand it because most of the notes given by lecturers are important. If you pay attention in class and understand the lesson well, you do not need to do much revision at home. Thus, you will have time to revise on other subjects in which you feel you are weaker in.
Next, every successful student must have a study plan. With a study plan, you will be able to divide your time equally among each subjects to help you study in a more effective manner. Therefore you are not to be spending too much time on only one or two subject. Some of the students just prepare for the subject that they like only, so they neglect the other subject that they are less interested. Hence a studuy plan is very important for the students who want success in their studies.
Finally, carry out group discussion is the best way to get success in study. Try to carry out the group discussion with your friends at least two or three times per week. During the group discussion, you can ask specific questions to help you understand things that you are unclear of. While explaining certain concepts through groups study, one can understand a certain concept better as well.
In conclusion, the best way to get good result in exams are concentration during lectures, have a study plan and carry out group discussions. Following these steps will ensure you a sure success in your examinations. All the best!
5:34 PM
Oreo,
It’s better to write this way: “Bring a partner along for the holiday. If possible, maybe someone whose dear to you. That would brighten up your holiday much more.” This is for the last step.
Renoma,
Very well written, however you have to limit your essay to 5 PARAGRAPHS. Thus, you will only have 3 paragraphs to describe your steps.
Leeze and Low
You have an example essay. Your examples are sufficient and well organized. However, this link is for you to write a process essay. I think you must have accidentally posted on the wrong link.
g@lz
Hmm…can’t really make out what your first sentence means. Could you please rephrase that sentence? Please note that you are only allowed to have 5 paragraphs in your essay. Thus, please combine paragraph 1 and 2 to make it an introduction paragraph. Well written introduction. Well written essay. Good use of various and suitable vocabulary. STUDENTS, have a look at this student’s writing.
11:53 AM
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